We had a great writing session on Wednesday (2 July). I played the tamariki a video of Ormie the Pig trying to get a cookie but stopped it just as Ormie was jumping out of the plane. The tamariki had to then write the ending of the story. Check out some of our great writing:
Ormie the Pig
By Hannah L
Ormie went to pull the string on the parachute but it dropped
like a stiff rock. He went to step forward to see where it went, but he fell.
Ormie fell face first into the ground. He started to cry
like he rain on a very rainy day. Like a little kid, he went to be very
disappointed. The next day the cookies just dropped to the ground and Ormie
started to eat them. All thanks to his little brother, Ormie Junior.
Ormie the Pig
By Olivia A
Ormie jumps out of the big, white green and blue place and
pulls out his parachute. He is gliding down until he knocks into a magpie and
looses his parachute. He is falling now and is about to fall on the roof of his
house, but misses and falls face first onto the concrete! After that, he goes
bowling into the house and gets his tricycle and crashes into the fridge. He
gets some jumping shoes and jumps high, but can’t reach the cookies so he
decides to go into the lounge. Later, his big brother, comes along and puts the
cookies onto two clean white plates and
give one to Ormie.
Ormie the Pig
By Yash
Ormie quickly jumped out of the plane, but just missed the
cookies. Then, he got a big black rope and swung it at the cookies, but he was
the one that flew through the air – not the rope.
Next, he smashed into the cookeis and bit into one. He found
out it was a chocolate chip cookie! He ate another and he even ate the jar.
Poor Ormie.
Ormie the Pig
By Hannah McNally
Ormie skipped out of the huge white plane and soard through the clear blue sky. He fell through the grey roof, grabbed the cookie jar and flew gently to the ground. He held the cookie jar by the lid and it fell on his foot!
“Ouch!” Ormie yelled.
Now he was too angry at the cookie jar to eat the cookies. Ormie threw the cookies in the bin!
Ormie the Pig
By Anna
Ormie leaps out of the place and flapped his arms wildly,
reaches for the parachute. But oh no! Where was his backpack?!?
Ormaie was falling, falling. He crashes through the roof and keeps falling.
Down, down
He crashed through the first and sectod floor and ends up in
his basement.
No cookies.
He wants a rest but he is not going to rest until he gets
his cookies.
He goes and gets his car and drives it straight into the
fridge. The cookies fall down. He grabs a cookie and is just about to eat it
when the jar falls down and gets stuck on his head!
Ormie the Pig
By Soverin
Ormie the silly pig jumps of the shiny white plane. Ormie
lands on a caveman’s home, then the caveman gets mad and whacks him!
Then Ormie runs home with ice blades on him and falls into a
prickle bush.
“The prickls are sore!”, says Ormie.
He decided to get cakes to eat instead
“I don’t actually like cookes”, says Ormie.
Ormie the Pig
By Vann
The stupid pig jumps out of the plane and crash lands into
his pool. He goes to a cave to get a big caveman to smash down the big fridge.
The jar then smashes.
The cookies were fake!
Then, the plane crashes into the house.
Ormie the Pig
By Harry
Ormie jumped out of the plane wanting to get the cookies. He
fell right through the roof. Then, Ormie fell through the floor into a dark
cave. Then a caveman found him so he banged him on the head!
When Ormie awoke, he ran for the fridge. Then a dragon came
and blew flames on Ormie’s belly. Ormie ran to his swimming pool and cooled
himself down.
Then Ormie realized that the dragon had eaten the cookies.
Ormie the Pig
By Lucy Cox
Ormie jumped out of the blue plane very carefully. He
parachuted onto a pink and blue seagull. Then landed on top of his red brick
roof.
He then got the seagull to fly him up to the top of the
fridge to get the cookies for him.
Ormie ordered the seagull to come down with the cookies, but just before the seagull came down, Ormie slipped on a stick. He landed on his back.
Just then the seagull dropped the cookies on Ormie’s tummy.
The jar started bouncing on Ormie’s tummy.
Ormie reached out and caught the jar and ate the cookies.
Ormie the Pig
By Xavier
Ormie decided to be a sky diver. He jumped out of the big
plane, but missed the cookies in the jar. He got suction cup shoes and climbed
the fridge but Ormie got stuck on the fridge…
Ormie the Pig
By Michael
When Ormie jumped out of the plane his string got cut and
then he tried to have a safe landing. But he didn’t!
Crash! Bang!
He bashed into the fridge. Then he gobbled the cookies and
he felt guilty!
Ormie the Pig
By Danial
Ormie jumps out of the aeroplane and forgot to use his
parachute and he lands on an eagle.
Ormie got sick, but he face planted on the ground. He got a
stick and started climbing up the fridge.
Finally he got the cookies.
Ormie the Pig
By Nehemiah
Ormie tried to get the jar of cookies. He jumped but it
didn’t work. He tried using a slingshot, but he was bad at aiming. He tried to
push the fridge over, but bad luck, the fridge was too heavy. He tested his new
plan. He pulled his parachute, but missed it and face planted. But Ormie got it
finally.
He ate the whole jar without opening the lid. Now, what is
he to do?
Ormie the Pig
By Hamish
Ormie somehow got in the white and green and blue plane. How
that happened, doesn’t matter.
He jumped out, he was going to pull the cord, but he ate the
cord because he was so hungry!
Ormie the Pig
By Anna
Ormie leaps out of the plane and flaps his arms wildly,
reaches for the parachute. But where was his backpack?
Ormie was falling, falling! He crashes through the rough
roof and keeps falling, down, down. He crashes through the 2nd and 1st
floor and ends up in his basement. No cookies.
He wants a rest but he is not going to rest until he gets
his cookies. He goes and gets his car and drives it straight into the fridge.
The cookies fall down. He grabs a cookie and is just about to eat it when the
jar falls down and gets stuck on his head
Ormie the Pig
By Keziah
Ormie was getting ready to jump out of the white plane. But
back at his house the bomb that he used on the see-saw blew up the fridge.
Remember what was on the fridge? The cookies!
The explosion sent the cookies up and up. Ormie dived out of
the white plane. He saw the cookies and …he caught them. But just as Ormie was
just over his house, he dropped the cookies.
Guess where they landed? They landed on the roof of his blue
house. Now what?
Ormie the Pig
By Jessie
Ormie the Pig fell out of the big plane. His hat fell off
too. So he tried to get it back.
He fell through the roof and landed in the cookie jar. He ate the cookies but was stuck in the jar. Ormie fell off the fridge and the jar cracked open.
Ormie got up and said, “Yum, yum”.
Ormie the Pig
By Tyler
Ormie is a very clumsy pig. So, he jumped out of the plane.
“Ahhhhhhhhh!” screamed Ormie.
Ormie pulled the cord for the parachute. The parachute
jumped off and Ormie was falling down. While falling, Ormie saw a seagull. They
played checkers. Then Ormie fell through the roof like a ball of thunder. Ormie
tried to grab the cookies. But he missed.
This time, he got a race car with 800hp. Ormied tied a rope
to the fridge and pulledd. The cookies fell out. Ormie gobbled them up like a
cheetah.
Ormie the Pig
By Brooklyn
Ormie the ferocious pig jumps out of the big plane. He pulls
his parachute. It falls apart and he ends up in lots of pain. Ormie swings off
a tight rope that didn’t work. He shoots himself out of a mighty canon and boy
did it hurt!
He finally gets a ladder to get a cookie. He got one and man
it was yummy!
Ormie the Pig
By Morgan
Ormied jumped out of the fast white plane and pulled the
string to flap the parachute out. But it flew away and Ormie crashed through
the ground.
Ormie the Pig
By Olivia F
Ormie drifted out of the huge plane. But he flew into his
neighbours house. Guess whose house it was??? Harry Styles from 1D!
Ormie was flung down into the toilet, but suddenly he was a
flying angel He flew up and grabbed the chocolate chip cookies. Then a horrid,
terrible dragon ate the angel pig…
Ormie the Pig
By Karim
Ormie fell out of the plane. He fell down and down until –
BOOM! Ormie crashed right through the roof and in front of the fridge. He gave
up his cookie adventure.
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